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I1- MOVIE ACTIVITY : INTO THE BLUE / PRESENT PERFECT x SIMPLE PAST TENSE
A) Watch the video segment and check all the activities you can see.
Jet ski
Travel to the Bahamas
Swim in the sea
Dive among the sharks 
Be inside a cave
Ride a speedboat
Kiss someone in the ocean
Go snorkeling
See a live shark
Be inside a grotto
Lose something in the sea
Find something valuable on the beach
Ask a few partners the following questions. Use the activities on the left. Follow the pattern:
A: Have you ever…………[jet skied?]
B: No, I haven´t / yes, I have.
A: When did you………………….?
B: I………………………………...
A: Who…………………………….?
etc
B) Write 8 sentences about the information presented in exercise A, using the words in parentheses. You may use different activities as well.
1-(never)………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
2-(never)………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
3-(already)…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
4-(already)……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
5-(yet)…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
6-(yet)………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
7-(last year)……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
8-(when I was a child)…………………………………………………………………………………………………………
c) Talk to a partner. Come up with a list of 5 things that both of you have never done but intend to before you die.
C) CHOOSE A DIFFERENT PARTNER AND ASK HIM/HER IF HE/SHE HAS EVER DONE WHAT YOU BOTH INTEND TO DO IN THE FUTURE. Use the pattern in exercise A.
HI, STUDENTS.
IT´LL BE A PLEASURE TO MEET YOU HERE IN OUR BLOG FOR THIS WORK. FOLLOW THE STEPS BELOW, LET YOU IDEAS FLOW AND BE CREATIVE. HAVE A GOOD JOB.
COMPOSITION
WRITE ABOUT YOU LIFE EXPERIENCES. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE OR HAVEN´T DONE? [ FACTS ABOUT YOU FAMILY, YOUR CHILDHOOD, YOUR STUDIES, ABOUT YOUR LIKES AND DISLIKES, THINGS YOU HAVE DONE TO HAVE FUN, TRAVELS , FRIENDS ETC]. USE THE STRUCTURES PRACTICED IN CLASS, SUCH AS "ALREADY, YET, NOT YET, BEFORE, ALWAYS, LATELY, RECENTLY, JUST, SO FAR ETC. GIVE INFORMATION ABOUT THESE EXPERIENCES DEFINING THE TIME WHEN THEY HAPPENED.
I’ve lived in Ceilândia since I was Born, when I was a baby, I lived in Expansão, I lived there for six months, but I [have] lived in Privê for fifteen years, I am fifteen years old. In my childhood, I played so much, when I was three years old, my first sister was born and in 2000, when I was six years old, my youngest sister was born. My family and I have always travelled [for] TO [very] LOTS OF places, but I’ve never [flied] FLOWN [of] IN AN airplane. I have gone to Maranhão since when I was a child, but I haven’t seen a beach, the sea yet. I took a tour of Caxias and I went sightseeing there last year, I took pictures there and I liked very much, IT was [too] terrific! I’ve already swum [on] IN riverS and falls, I love this. I’ve admired the japanese culture, and two years ago I tried sushi. [] ANother [oriental] EASTERN food [what] THAT I ate [,] was Yakisoba [and] IT was [very] delicious! I’ve gone to the mall with two friends recently, IT was so funny! The day was rainy and we were wet, we lost the beginning of the movie in the cinema, the time was little and we [’ve just seen] ONLY SAW the film! I’ve always liked to study, [then I’ve already won any gratitude,?] the [late] LAST quiz [what] I did, was of Physics [,] . [because] I’ve always liked Chemistry and Physics, I didn’t like Math, but actually, I like it too. I’ve studied at CILC for two years and six months, I didn’t like English, but I’ve liked it lately. I haven’t still fulfilled all my dreams, but I am so happy, because I have the best family of the world!!!
ReplyDeleteIsabel, congratulations. Good work! Way to go.
ReplyDeleteObserve the corrections in brackets and capital letters. Thanks.
My names IS Wilverson. I`ve lived in Ceilândia. [But] [i] I`ve never flown in an airplane. I`ve gone to [to] Tocantins since 2008. I`ve [study] STUDIED at cilc for three years. I`ve already tried feijoada. I`ve admired the italian`s food. I ate pizza it was delicious. But [i] I haven`t tried sashimi yet. I [`ve] haven`t [tied] TRIED japanese food yet. I`ve ALREADY tried brazilian`s food [yet]. I`ve never visited Island before. I`ve visited Maranhão [here] since 2007.
ReplyDeleteHello, Wilverson. Your writing is full of disconnected sentences.
ReplyDeleteI ['ve been] WAS born in Serra Talhada- PE. When I was a little child I left my hometown. I came to Distrito Federal when I was two years old. Since then, I’ve lived in Ceilândia Norte. I’ve had many experiences since I’ve been here, some of them were good, others bad. I’ve always lived with my grandparents. My grandfather died seven years ago. Since then, I’ve just lived with my grandmother. In my life there aren’t exciting stories. I have an ordinary life. I’ve always wished to have an exciting life. I’ve always wished to go to North America, Europe, and Asia. I’ve always wanted to know Israel, United States, Egypt (to see the pyramids), England and others countries. I’ve always wanted to visit the east because I think very interesting their culture; I would like to learn more about that. I’ve always dreamed to go to these places but I have never been in any of them yet. The most exciting adventure I’ve ever had in my whole life was when I traveled to Santos and went up a hill in a cable car. I’ve already traveled to Santos and Carnaíba. I’ve flown by plane lately; it was my first time when I went to Santos. I’ve studied at Cilc for two and a half years. I’ve learned a lot of things so far. Since I remember I’ve always loved Cilc; I learned to love it so much, and today it’s part of my life. English is my favorite subject in the school. I’ve always hated Biology, Physics, Chemistry, Math and ArtS since the first time I [’ve] met them. These subjects really are the punishment for my sins! I am kidding! I’ve always liked to do exercises. My favorite sport is basketball. I love to play basketball. It’s a wonderful sport. I started to play basketball three years ago. Since then, I haven’t stopped. Well, I have many dreams and I believe that one day, I’ll achieve them and realize all my wishes. With my GOD, friends and family’s help I believe that one day everything I’ve always dreamed will come truth.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations, Ivson.
ReplyDeleteDon´t let anything make you give up being such a brilliant student.
I’ve lived in Ceilândia since I was Born, when I was a baby, I lived in Expansão, I lived THERE FOR five years and six months, but I had to [switch] MOVE to ceilandia. this is the moment [that] WHEN my life really starts. That part of my life I call the beginning. My mom was working then she met someone she was interested, soon they were dating after eight years they were married. [desde 1999, eles são casados] THEY HAVE BEEN MARRIED SINCE 1999. He is very good for me and my sister. He is my stepfather...
ReplyDeleteI've traveled to espirito santo, IT was very good, I ['ve] took pictures. I've never [swam] SWUM with sharks, [there had not sharks] THERE HAVEN´T BEEN SHARKS THERE, thankfully.that year was great.
This part of my life [and] I [speak] USE TO SAY it is [fog] TOUGH [?]. I was not willing to study, my stepfather gave me lots of advice, IT was [there that] WHEN I saw that I had to [?give it in my life] LISTEN TO HIM AND TAKE IT SERIOUSLY. After five years.I call this part of MY LIFE "the storm". I worked at [this]
Universidade Catolica for one year. Since 2008 my life [is] HAS HAD a lot of problems. My family [is with] HAS BEEN THROUGH many legal problems, [more] BUT EVEN with all these problems I will not let go of my dreams.this is my life AND I love my family.
Victor, thanks for letting me get you know you better. Everybody has problems and hurts sometimes. Don´t give up your dreams. Never.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Laysssa, I`ve studied in Cilc for 3 years, [have] I AM 15 years old. Since [children] I WAS A CHILD I´VE loveD to draw, listen to music, sing and see movies. I began like [music] romantic MUSIC [style will be] eight years ago and [would like of] draw [will be] 11 years ago.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite designs are of fashion designers. I like drawING clothes, accessories and shoes. My favorite songS [is] ARE "Cry", "Chocolate Quente" and “Quimíca ’’. Lately, I´VE preferRED reading books to watching movies, they are more detailed, but still love watching movies, my favorites are [of] action, romance and comedy.
I´VE just read a book called ''A Diary of a Princess". It is a very interesting book. I´VE already watchED the movie, but the book is much better. But [despite] THOUGH I HAVE [having] several things that I love, my true passion is my family and especially my God.
Ok, Layssa. Attention to the corrections. Practice more.
ReplyDeleteI was born in 1992. When I was a child, I always had too many funny experiences. I used to play with my friends in the streets ridding my pink bike.
ReplyDeleteI live with my parents and two sisters. [? I lived in Ceilândia since I was 3 years old and lately I moved to Taguatinga where I still living there so far, and I’ve studied at Taguatinga for 13 years but didn’t yet!]
Recently, I´VE finished an administration course and in the end of the year I hope TO finish the high school. [and] I´VE already started studying for the "vestibular" to take psychology at university and after finishing I intend to travel abroad because I’ve studied at Cilc since 2007 and I want to practice and improve my English. I’ve travelled to Bahia too many times with my family because we really love that place and we have lots of fun with friends.
I really like spend my free time [witch] WITH my friends, listening to music, to dance ballet, eat a lot and I like spending my father’s money buying melissas. I don’t like ice cream, I really hate false people and before ending this text I couldn’t finish without telling about my biggest passion by Jesus. My light, my way and my savior [such as] BECAUSE I’m a Christian.
Jenny, thanks for participating.
ReplyDeleteThe corrections are in CAPITAL LETTERS and what was confusing or wrong I put in [].
When I was A little CHILD[.] I played with my friends on the street. [Before] I [did not] HAVEN´T careD ABOUT [so much] the studies VERY MUCH BEFORE [more] BUT today I ['m] I HAVE.
ReplyDeleteThe course I've ever done in life so far, is the English course. I´VE never liked English , but with time I was getting used to the language
I DO not live without my friends. I am [a] very affectionate with [the] MY family.
A very nice experience for me and my family
was WHEN WE WENT to the beach. WE [we] went to Porto Seguro in Bahia. IT was a wonderful trip.[mainly looking at the wonderful view is the sea]
I've never been TO [in] THE U.S.A. I´D LIKE [wanted] to have the opportunity to [meet] KNOW THE COUNTRY.
[And] A [a] goal that I have in my life
is to pass the UNB. That is a goal that I´VE HAD [have] since childhood .
Giovana. There are lots of CORRECTIONS in your composition. Try to write using the order SUBJECT, VERB, OBJECTS, AND COMPLEMENTS at this level.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kelly Rodrigues. I was born in
ReplyDeleteBrasilia. During childhood I ['ve] lived with my family in Sector O, and then moved to Ceilandia Sul, because my dad was able to buy our home. We have been there ever since, it´s been 14 years now. I am 17 years old, live with my parents and sister. I love my family and thank God for having a wonderful and blessed family. I also love my boyfriend; I know I can count on him when needed. Friends?! I have a few. It is hard to find true friendship [now days] NOWADAYS, friends who are not fake or gossipers. I hate fakeness and lies. I love to laugh, eat, sleep, surf the web, study English, listen to loud music, date and read the bible. I have graduated IN high school and will start college on the second semester of 2010. I want to take pedagogy and a post graduate degree in English. I want to teach kids English. When I finish college I want to do and exchange program in the United States, to perfect my English. When I started the English course at Cilc, I didn’t like it as much, although lately I have been enjoying it.
Finally, once I get my life straight, I want to marry my boyfriend AND have two kids. I also want God to fulfill his call on my life. What I haven´t want ever is to leave Gods presence.
Ok, Kelly, Thanks for the participation. Good work.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Thereza Eduarda but prefer TO BE CALLED Eduarda. I've studied [since] FOR four years, I've studied at CILC since July 2007, the CILC has offered me great knowledge. I'm going TO college currently. I´VE live in Ceilandia since 1991, I´VE always lived in Ceilandia.
ReplyDeleteI've worked at [this] THE senate for five months, I love my job, I have [much] A LOT OF success! I prefer to watch [movies of] [comedy] COMEDIES, I've seen "Se eu fosse voce" with Tony Ramos and Gloria Pires four times so far, but I ['ve] still haven't found a PERFECT movie [perfect].
Thereza,thanks for the participation. Try to write more to practice.
ReplyDeleteMy family and I have moved to Brasília from São Paulo. We came here in 1995. It was a very difficult time for me, because I had to leave my friends. But worst of all was to study in another school. I still remember my first day of school in Brasília. When I entered the classroom the classmates looked at me as if I were an E.T. They whispered something I could not hear. For many days I studied without any classmate talk to me. One day one of the classmates began talking to me, and we became best friends. Gradually I got used to [live] LIVING in this new city. Today, I love Brasília and I can’t imagine living elsewhere.
ReplyDeleteFabiana, your paragraph is ok. Clear. I think you should have written about other experiences.
ReplyDeleteMy family and I have moved to Brasília from Goiás , now I’ve lived here since 2002 , my family moved to Goiás from São Paulo in 1997. Where I lived is a small city “Mimoso de Goiás” , this city just have 3000 people . I came to Ceilândia in 2007 and I’ve study at CILC since THEN [2007] . My dream was to live in the big city , because I have a chance in life , I want to go to college and [planning arquitur] STUDY ARCHITECTURE . In my family,[all] EVERYBODY studies. My mother and my sisters are AT college , my sisters are STUDYING law [school] and my mother is STUDYING teaching , I want to continue studying because the studies [we] can HELP US TO BE GOING PLACES. [reach everywhere .]
ReplyDeleteWesley, your paregraph is also clear. I think you should have written more about other experiences as well.
ReplyDeleteHi people, my name's EWERSON VIEIRA. I was born in BRASILIA, and I'm 16 yearS old. I´VE always lived with my family (3 brotheRs and MY parents). The first place where I lived was in TAGUATINGA, and then I moved to CEILÂNDIA, where I´VE lived until today. Since I was A child, I've gone to my grandmother's house once a month.
ReplyDeleteWell, I have studied English at CILC since 2007. And at the moment, I am [making] DOING [too] the ["crisma"] CONFIRMATION, because I'm A CATHOLIC [catolico], and this is the best thing which I've been doing in my life. In the future, I want TO STUDY [make graduate] administration, [meet all] TRAVEL AROUND THE world, get married and [build] RAISE a family.
Ewerson. The corrections are in capital letters. Sometimes I don´t know exactly what all the students mean, so I try to get the idea and write it clearly. You should have written more about your experiences.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jéssica, I've lived in Ceilândia since I was born.I live with my mother,my stepfather and my brothers. My parents are [separete] divorced. I see my father sometimes once a month. I have an almost DIFFICULT life [difficult,] because my father can not help me. Finally, there are several problems in my life, but despite all MY PROBLEMS [they] I've got a great life. In my life in particular I like to access the internet,I love TO eat and sleep.I do not like studyING, cleanING the house and readING books. I´VE never visited [to the] Amazonas and I´VE never traveled by plane.
ReplyDelete[How] AS I have [much] A LOT OF time left, I will be able to do everything that I want.
I'VE LIVED IN CEILÂNDIA SINCE I WAS BORN.
ReplyDeleteI [AWOKEN] awake VERY EARLY TO [GONE] go TO SCHOOL.I EAT [EN] AFTER [OF] SCHOOL. IN THE AFTERNOON I [GONE] go TO CILC. I'VE STUDIED AT CILC SINCE 2007. [AND] IN THE EVENING I GO [GONE] TO [CHURC.] CHURCH. I [BEEN] went to CALDAS NOVAS SOME YEARS AGO,I [SWUM] swam VERY WELL. I'VE NEVER FLOWN [OF] in an AIRPLANE.
I´['VE] have a LARGe FAMILY, MY GRAnDMOTHER AND GRANDFATHER [BUILT] raised ONE BIG FAMILY, [TO DEALT ONE SMALL DIFFICULT,AFTER LEARNT.]
Priscilla, there are lots of serious problems with your paragraph.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Elierson.I ['ve lived] live in Ceilândia. I`ve flown in an airplane. I've gone to São Paulo since 2006 because I've visited my grandmother. I've gone to Rio de Janeiro since 2007. [This is] THEIR typical food is fantastic. I've already tried the feijoada, I've visited the Pão de Açúcar,I've seen the Cristo Redentor. I haven't tried the mocotó yet. I've studied at cilc for three years. I've never gone to Estrutural before. I've never [swin] SWUM in the sea.
ReplyDeleteI was born in Fortaleza in 1995 but I've lived here since 2000. I think I'm going back to Fortaleza in [next] two years. I like to learn about different cultures, so I've always wanted to visit a lot of countries, specially Finland. I would love to live there. It's an interesting place with a very nice language that unfortunate ly I still haven't learned. Maybe in the future, I guess. I like music and books very very much. I've read "The Boy in Striped Pyjamas" recently. Just loved the story. Now I'm reading "The Book Thief" for the third time. It's one of my favourite books. Last year I started a music course and it's going better and better. I haven't learned to play a musical instrument yet, but when I finish the course I will begin to play the violin. I like to photograph too, but someone stole my camera last Tuesday. I was really angry about it.
ReplyDeleteBrenna, congratulations.
ReplyDeleteYou really write very well. Nice paragraph.
When I was a child, I was so cute and very intelligent. My [histories] STORIES about my childhood are funny. I [have fall] FELL [of] OFF my bed many times and I [have already] hurt [me] MYSELF in different places. I ‘m only eighteen years old and for ten years, I [have been] WAS an only daughter of my parents. When my mother married again, I got a brother. [He has called] HIS NAME IS Vítor. He [has gone] WENT to [the] school about 4 and on the first day in the school, he [has played] PLAYED in the playground AND he broke his arm. He has broken many parts of his body, about three times so far and he is only eight years old. I have done different things [for] to HAVE fun. I have already traveled with my friends and with my father but I haven’t traveled with my mother yet. Last year, I went out with my friends many times and since I have begun to study in the [Colleague] COLLEGE, I have met many people, I have seen good movies, I have visited beautiful places and recently I have seen an art exhibition, I [haven’t never] HADN´T visited it BEFORE. I have just done VERY INTERESTING works and projects [very interesting] and after all THESE activities [has] HAVE finished, I´LL ]have been] BE relaxed.
ReplyDeleteDrielly, dear. Attention to the tenses. If you are describing an event that is completely in the past. You´ve made some confusions.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Bianca, I am sixteen years old. I was born and grew up in ceilandia. [Mu] MY parents divorcied when I was seven years. Now I live with my mother and my two brothers. I ['ve] lived with my father for two years in P. Sul, but now I just go there [in] ON weekends. In my childhood I'd prefer TO play [ed] in my house, I was A teacher, mother, A singer, AN actrees... I'm a dreamer. My dream is TO go to GREECE [grecia] and be A model.
ReplyDeleteI want TO study administration and have my business, I want TO get married, have a girl and a boy and live in Brasilia.
Bianca, try to write more, give more details, use the language studied next time, ok?
ReplyDeleteI was born in 1993. When I was a kid, I always did mess. I used to play ball with my friends in the streets and parks.
ReplyDeleteI live with my mother and my brother. [When] I lived in Taguatinga. [and] My parents separated when I was a child. At the end of the year I finished high school. I have started early to study for college entrance. I've [recently] STUDIED [in the] AT CILC since 2007 and I want to practice and improve my English.
I´VE traveled to Goiania [often] with my family OFTEN because we really love [this] THAT place and I have a lot of fun with friends.
I really enjoy spending my free time with my friends, listening to music, eat a lot, going to church, dating ...
Recently my life has been great, but I've been through various events that let us down. Still, now I [run after] GO FOR my dreams and never give up! And I know that God and my family are with me!
Ok, Bruno, good work.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Renzo. I [have] AM 16 years OLD. I [’ve] live [d] in [Brazilian] BRASÍLIA. I played [a] football in 2007,I played in Ceilandia Sports Club, trained in Jaguar . I’ve fought karate, [championed a Brazilian], stopped at brown belt, I [have] stopped [here] FIGHTING KARATE [for a] 5 years ago. I visited [to] Ilheus in 2008. I’ve never visited [to] Rio de Janeiro. I [? gotta]STARTED English in 2006, at cilc. I have loved my father and mother. I have four brothers and one sister. My father and mother ARE divorced. I haven’t missED my father, because [same] EVEN divorced, I´VE ALWAYS [ever] countED ON [he] HIM. I have liked [a] clothing BRANDS, my favorite brand IS [a] Oakley. I haven’t liked [a] shoes, I [liked] PREFER [a] sandals. [I listened [a] music [a] pagoda] I´VE ENJOYED "PAGODE". I [have loved] LOVE [a] motorcycleS, my dream [ed] IS a cbr 1000 rr Fireblade, I want to have ONE AT [with] 25 [years] . I and my father FELL DOWN FROM A [fall] motorcycle in 2005. I have also [falled] FALLEN several times, so that increases my love [d] [with] FOR motocycleS.
ReplyDeleteI have Loved [a] God, God [and] IS faithful.
Renzo, thanks for the participation.
ReplyDeleteThe mistakes are in [] and the corrections e capital letters. Some sentences I´ve changed to make sense although I don´t know what you really mean.
I've [knew] MET incredible friends. They and me have spoken french. In the beginning, there was a competition. The prize was a trip to France. We needed TO be a team. But, our contact made us friends. In my opinion, the best prize was their friendship. I loved this experience. I always call to my "french friends". I'm going to keep it in my memory.
ReplyDeleteKethellen
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a very short paragraph. You should have written more about your experiences in many more aspects, especially using the structures studied.
My name is Sheron, I was born in Brasilia, I live [d] in ceilândia,I am fifteen years old and I have two brothers and one sister. My family is descendant of Italian and French, IT IS said they were rich,"but my grandmother didn't want inheritance".
ReplyDeleteI don't care for the [hetage] INHERITANCE, but it would be a great opportunity to go live in Italy or France, then at least I would practice my English. But I would rather live im Brazil!!
Sheron, ok.
ReplyDeleteWhy didn´t you write more?
[Into the blue is film of adventure look sea and your beauty.] [But sea is dangerous. The animal dangerous is shark, dive among the sharks.] Dholpin beautiful and funny. Two bous and two girl ride speedboat and jet ski in the sea.Swim in the sea.Sea has beautiful grotto.They to stron in the beach]
ReplyDeleteErlan, you are supposed to write about you and your experiences in life up till now. Not about the film 'INTO THE BLUE', ok? Besides your sentences need improving.
ReplyDeleteI’ve liveD in ceilândia since I WAS seven yearS OLD but I was born in Espirito Santo. [?I lived there for nine years.?]. when I was a child , I [ride] RODE a bike and played football . I’ve never [went] BEEN to São Paulo, but my father HAS already BEEN THERE . My family and I have gone to Minas Gerais every year but I’ve not yet [flied] flown [of] in an airplane. [??Lesr year for I studies the eighth , this year I have studies first year.??] LAST YEAR I WAS IN THE 8th GRADE AND THIS YEAR I AM IN THE FIRST YEAR OF HIGH SCHOOL. I’ve [studies] STUDIED at CILC for four years. I've always liked to study at CILC.
ReplyDeleteVictor. Your composition is here. What I think more difficult to understand is in [???]. Practice often.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Hellan. IT has happened to me a funny story. I went to a farm with relatives, I spent about 2 days there, the 2nd day [i] I RODE [walked the] A horse , it appearED some people and they wanted to ride [a] THE horse. [They asked that I leaving the horse , I was leaving ,] when I [went down] GOT DOWN OFF THE HORSE my pants got stuck and ripped in two places. [in the pants.] Imagine my face. I was like a pepper!
ReplyDeleteHellan, your story seems to be funny but you should have given more details and written about other experiences, using the language studies.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lucas. I've studied in cilc for 3 or 4 years. I've never [reprove] BOMBED. I was born in 1995. When [i] I was a child, I aways played soccer with my friends. IVE BEEN GOIND ['m going] to school since I was 4 years old. I've never liked school, but I understand that IT is important. I aways liked English, but learning is hard. My family does not travel a lot, but I like to travel [yet]. One of [f] my dreams is travelING to [maracana] MARACANÃ AND see my team(Fluminense) playING. I´LL ['ve] gone to [maracana] one day. That's all I can say. Bye.
ReplyDeleteLucas, try to write more. The corrections are in capital letters and the mistakes or things I couldn´t understand in [].
ReplyDeleteI was born in Minas Gerais. But my family and I moved to Taguatinga when I was three years old. We’ve lived in Taguatinga since [them] THEN. When I was a child, I liked to play and dance with my friends. When I was fourteen yeas old, I started studYing Spanish at CILC and finished six years later. I’ve taken another idiom at CILC, the English Course since 2007. When I was twenty years old, I entered [in] the University and took graduation in Biology four years later. My graduation was last month. I’ve worked in the Technology Company and genetic resources (Embrapa) during all the course. I’ve traveled [for] TO many cities in Brazil, but I’ve never traveled to other countrIES [y]. I love travelING!!! My boyfriend and I have always watched [to] movies in my house. We haven’t watched [to] movies in the cinema yet. Our favorite movieS HAVE [has] been comedy. I’ve often gone to the Congress of Biology with five friends. It has been a good experience for my career. Anyway, my life so far has been great. When I will be thirty years old, I’d like to get married and have many children.
ReplyDeleteOK, Darlene. Good account of your experiences. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Antonio Kleber, I [have] AM 17 years OLD, I like to travel, and I enjoy [ed] playing football with friends. ONCE I traveled to Fortaleza, I bathed IN THE SEA [???her on the beach], dived, went out with my family, [drove] RODE A jet ski, I and my family [we] STAYED IN AN [the] apartment with 4 swimming pools. IT was very good.
ReplyDeleteI also traveled to Caldas Novas, I and my friends STAYED in AN [the] apartment next to everything, it was great. I met new people, enjoying it with my friends. I feel like jumping with a parachute, GET THE adrenaline GOIND [a thousand], [had to] IT MUST be very good, I would not have the courage to dive with sharks.
I love going to the movies, the last time I went, I saw the movie AVATAR, I really enjoyed the movie [too long] VERY MUCH, next time I go I´LL see the movie Iron Man 2. I like spending time with my girlfriend, work out, go kart and other things.
Antonio. You told a good tale. You should have talked about the things you have done as well.
ReplyDeleteI was born in 1994 in Ceilândia, so I´ve lived there since then. I´ve studied at CILC since 2005. I´ve always lived with my grandparents, since I WAS A baby, I´ve liked livING there because I´m the only ‘girl’ of the family, so I´ve [have] HAD everthing I want. [In the] Last year I wanted TO travel, so my grandfather took me [for] TO Guarapari with my Uncles and my Cousins.
ReplyDeleteThere [i´ve gone] I WENT to the sea for my first time, I cried [for] IN emotion. I was there 15 days, and [i´ve] HAD FUN [funny] very [mutch] MUCH, b[?????ecause I ‘took’ my cousin there and I ‘took’ yet]. That one was my better travel.
Karoline, the corrections are in capital letters.
ReplyDeleteThings I wish but I’ve never done…
ReplyDeleteIf you ask to me : Have you ever [met the] BEEN TO Australia [yet] ? I will answer, no I haven`t , not yet, because I didn`t have the opPortunitY. But I`d like [so mucH to meet]TO GO TO [the] Australia VERY MUCH. I`ve never gone sightseeing in the other contries , but I`ve met people of other [culturies] CULTURES. I`ve already tried the [Japonese] JAPANESE food at [the] A very [well] GOOD restaurant in Rio de Janeiro.
I went [in] TO Rio in 2001, and the experience was very good, I [`ve] met [?affinity] people, and I inviteD [they] THEM to swim in sea. I`ve never met people [than] as [they] THEM. Since the day that we met I`ve never forgotten [at this] THAT moment… Maybe next week I will take a [travel] TRIP to THE Bahamas because last month my [fly] FLIGHT got canceled and now I think it’s not a problem…
Walber, attention to the corrections.
ReplyDeleteI [´ve] lived in Ceilândia during my childhood and I moved to Recanto das Emas where I live. [Already] In my childhood, I loved playing all kinds of [fun] GAMES, always playing with my sister. [Yet] In my 15TH BIRTHDAY [years] I won a trip as a birthday gift to America, I went to Disney, an incredible place, I [´ve met] KNEW a little of their culture, a place super clean! Unlike Brasil. Just [a] THE food is not very good. The parks are too perfect. I [´ve] loved visit the country.
ReplyDeleteGleyssiane, here is you paragraph. You should´ve written more. Observe the corrections.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Ruan, I've lived in Ceilandia since I was born, I've lived in Ceilandia Sul. I' ve studied at cilc for three years. I've always lived with my parents, I ['ve] HAVE no brotherS or sisterS, I am [the only son] AN ONLY CHILD. I've had many experiencies since [?], some of them were good, others bad. I've never flown in AN airplane. I ['ve already] went to Maranhão in 2008, passing [in] BY President Dutra and San luis. I've admired the japan food, I tried sushi. I've always wished to go to North America and EuropE [a]. I've always wanted to go to THE United States, Canada, England and other [s] countries. My favorite sport is footbal. I've ALWAYS loveD football and basketball
ReplyDeleteOk Ruan.
ReplyDeletejéssica priscila said...
ReplyDeleteIn my last vocation I´m going to maceió, was perfectly. I visited all the places,museum,theatre parties. All the places visited. After that I went to Fortaleza, my parents staied in Maceió. I went with my cousin Kety she´s very very funny and my grandfather and grandmother she make a cake for me every day.
In Fortaleza I went out every night, I danced very very much, and I went to shopping, i Sow movies, ate diferents foods and went to the beach. I went to church. I went stay here forever.
Larissa said...
ReplyDeleteI've gone to New york on my vocation.Has been very fun,but my trip has been boring,because we had mechanical problems.But I had fun,has been very relaxing.I've know many places pretty.
I've bought many clothes and shoes for me in New York,It's very cheap.
In New York the weather have been very good!
I loved my vocation.
Diosley Macedo - I3V2I1 said...
ReplyDeleteIn 2009, my family and I, we have a travelled. We went to Fortaleza. We have sleeped in a hotel. I liked of hotel. I don't liked the food. I have swum in beach; My mother don't like swim, hasn't swam. We had very experiences. We did an excellent travel.