HI STUDENTS! LET´S MEET HERE AND DO A WRITING ACTIVITY. I´D LIKE YOU TO WATCH THIS VIDEO ABOUT THIS ENGLISH SCHOOL IN CAPE TOWN AND WRITE ABOUT WHAT MOST IMPRESSED YOU IN THE VIDEO. WAS IT THE SCHOOL ITSELF? THE BEACHES? THE SAFARI? THE POSSIBILITY TO MAKE FRIENDS FROM DIFFERENT CULTURES? DO YOU THINK THIS PLACE IS SIMILAR TO BRAZIL IN SOME ASPECTS? IF YOU STAYED WITH A FAMILY THERE, HOW WOULD YOU BEHAVE YOURSELF? IS IT IMPORTANT TO KNOW THE RULES OF ETIQUETTE? HAD YOU THOUGHT ABOUT CULTURAL LITERACY BEFORE?
I had heard about the politics of South Africa before because the Apatheid was a shame that had become news everywhere at that time, but the beauty of Cape Town I hadn´t seen before. What most impressed me in the video was the similarity between Brazil and Africa. It must be very good to lie on the beach there. The sun there must be as hot as here. If I stayed with a host family I might learn a lot about the culture. I may........./ I might be able to......../ I can..........etc etc.
I like the English Schoo en Cape Town.It's so interesting and it's a very good experience.In this school teachers teach English with true experiences and true life.The view is so beautiful and relaxing.The adventures in South Africa are radicals, funny and interesting.It's a good place for a English school.The students might be very happy when they stay in a host family and they learn much with their experiences. William P. I5V5I3
This is it! William. The first one, although I think you should´ve written more. Ok ? I´m going to make some corrections:
I like the English School in Cape Town.It's so interesting and it's a very good experience.In this school teachers teach English with true experiences and true life.The view is so beautiful and relaxing.The adventures in South Africa are radical, funny and interesting.It's a good place for an English school.The students might be very happy when they stay with a host family and they learn a lot with their experiences. William P. I5V5I3
Camila Viviane said... I really liked the city because the cable is a very interesting and attractive. His English schools offer a high quality education, and moreover offer activities that encourage students to study. I am willing to travel to it to improve my English and to know the culture of Africans. Foreign students who do exchange in Cape Town, are well received and have the choice between staying in a host family or in one of EF's residences. And students who stay in host families are very close to the local culture and learn how the daily lives of residents, as students who prefer the republics know students from different places and learn a little of different cultures. Cape Town is a magical place, and also offers several tourist attractions, both for students and for tourists. The beaches are beautiful, walking in the savanna are extraordinary and the city still offers attractions such as nightclubs, shopping malls and other places for fun. And are all those things that make Cape Town a place unlike any other, and so it attracts people from all over the world who are studying in order to have fun and learn new cultures.
Hello, Camila Viviane. That´s it!Very good. You´ve explored lots of different aspects of the video. Good work. Here are some corrections:
I really liked the city because the cape is a very interesting and attractive place. This English school offers a high quality education, and moreover, it offers activities that encourage students to study. I am willing to travel to it to improve my English and to know the culture of Africans. Foreign students who do exchange in Cape Town, are well received and have the choice between staying in a host family or in one of EF's residences. And students who stay in host families are very close to the local culture and learn about the residents´daily lives, as for the students who prefer the students´ residence meet students from different places and learn a little of different cultures. Cape Town is a magical place, and also offers several tourist attractions, both for students and for tourists. The beaches are beautiful, walking in the savanna are extraordinary and the city still offers attractions such as nightclubs, shopping malls and other places for fun. And are all those things that make Cape Town a place unlike any other, and so it attracts people from all over the world who are studying in order to have fun and learn new cultures.
Luiz Henrique. I like learning about other cultures. People in this school should learn other customs. The place is wonderful, they can have fun too.What most impressed me in the video was the animals and the place very beautiful. And the activities in the beaches are very radical. The students might be very happy when they learn other contumes. So the English School in Cape Town must be very important for students who like to study English.
Hello Luiz, very well, let´s correct the paragraph.
I like learning about other cultures. People in this school should learn other customs. The place is wonderful, they can have fun too.What most impressed me in the video was the animals and the place, IT´S very beautiful. And the activities in the beaches are very radical. The students might be very happy when they learn other contumes. So the English School in Cape Town must be very important for students who like to study English.
Victor Douglas said... This school is amazing. The local it’s very same with Brazil, I'm talking about the weather, of course, its very hot.
If I study in Cape Town, I don't have problem with the weather. And then there's the beaches, safari and the people, they are fantastic. But I got to know their culture first, right? Like how greeting the people on the streets? And the local Taboos?
Might I stay with a local family, because maybe I learned more of the culture of there, and I have much of curiosity about the Apartheid. For this, that school its fantastic, because the local, adventures and the local (again)is fantastic. One day maybe, I go to cape Town, study on EF Cape Twon.
This school is amazing. The local IS very SIMILAR TO Brazil, I'm talking about the weather, of course, it´S very hot.
If I study in Cape Town, I WON´T have problemS with the weather. And then there ARE the beaches, safari and the people, they are fantastic. But I got to know their culture first, right? SUCH AS how greeting the people on the streets, and the local Taboos.
IF I stay with a local family, I MAY learn more ABOUT the culture, there, and I have A LOT of curiosity about the Apartheid. For this, that school Is fantastic, because the PLACE, THE adventures ARE GREAT. MAYBE, One day I´LL go to cape Town AND study on EF Cape Twon.
Oh,I think this is incredible,because the students can see wonderful places,learn a lot of new things that maybe they didn't learn,practice sports and they can meet some people of different places of the world, so this is very nice. I think the form they know the culture of Africa and others cultures is so interesting and fun. There are some schools in Brazil where the classes are boring. Humm...In the video I could see similiar things of Brazil ,as the beaches,as the smiles on the faces of people and other things.But ,If I stayed at any home would be very good ,but I feel strange because maybe I wouldn't know how I have to behave in theirhouse.
Oh,I think THE SCHOOL IN CAPE TOWN is incredible because the students can see wonderful places,learn a lot of new things that maybe they didn't learn,practice sports and they can meet some people of different places IN the world, so this is very nice. I think the form they know the culture of Africa and other cultures ARE so interesting and fun. There are some schools in Brazil where the classes are boring. Humm...In the video I could see similiar things TO Brazil ,as the beaches,the smiles on the people´S FACES and other things.If I stayed at any home would be very good ,but I feel strange because maybe I wouldn't know how TO behave in their house.
Cape town is a wonderful place,and very interesting,too.There are a lot of things to do in there.You can study and the same time to have fun. I had heard about Cape town school is a great school.If you really want to improve your english you must go to Cape town school. You can staying with host family or one in of EF's residences.If you stayng with host family you can learn things about the culture of Africa..It's very interesting. There are many places to visite and to have fun.Such as go to the beach,relax,practice sports. Anyway,Cape town is an amazing city.
Hello, Monica, good composition. Here is the correction.
Cape town is a wonderful place,and very interesting,too.There are lots of things to do there.You can study and AT the same time have fun. I had heard about Cape town school AND THIS great school.If you really want to improve your English you must go to Cape town. You can stay with A host family or in ONE OF THE EF's residences.If you stay with A host family you can learn things about the culture of Africa..It's very interesting. There are many places to visit and to have fun.Such as goING to the beachES, relax, Practice sports. Anyway,Cape town is an amazing city.
Cape Town is magnificent it’s impressive .This is a beautiful and It remembers Brazil. In Cape Town, I want one day may go to study because It offers many activities for stimulate the student to study. In EF School the Cape Town the student may improve your English apart from the general English it can also study the culture for culture the South Africa for example: customs, arts, music and others. The culture of the South Africa is very rich and interesting. And the most interesting is that student can host in the school or an A host family, I think is host family is better because they can you help in the study to student don’t has many expensive at your host. In Cape Town to interesting the tourist points there are beautiful beaches to practice surf, play volleyball and others sports. The EF school in Cape Town is one good place for study English.
Cape Town is magnificent AND impressive .This is a beautiful PLACE and It REMINDS ME OF Brazil. I MAY GO TO STUDY IN CAPE TOWN one day because It offers many activities for stimulatING the student to study. In EF School IN Cape Town the student may improve THEIR English. Apart from the general English STUDENTS can also study the culture OF South Africa for example: customs, arts, music and others. The culture of the South Africa is very rich and interesting. And the most interesting is that student can STAY in the school RESIDENCE or WITH A host family, I think IT BETTER TO STAY WITH A host family because they can help YOU in YOUR studIES AND IT´S NOT VERY EXPENSIVE. In Cape Town, the touriSTIC points are AMAZING. THERE ARE beautiful beaches to practice surf, play volleyball and other sports. The EF school in Cape Town is A good place TO study English.
K@u@ninha said... The cape town school is perfect, because the school has everything I need. In Cape Town you study and has funny at the same time. At this school I can study English and learn about others cultures. I liked very much this school, and I want so much study in Cape town.
In my opinion, the best local of Cape Town is the beach, because I love the sea. I can see the much animal’s kind too. Other interesting of this school, there are houses for families.
To done, is a dream study at Cape Town, because the school is perfect and a good opportunity for speak English fluently and my family gonna be proud.
Kauane, very good. Nice composition. Here is the correction.
The cape town school is perfect, because the school has everything I need. In Cape Town you study and HAVE FUN at the same time. At this school I can study English and learn about other cultures. I liked this school VERY MUCH, and I want TO study in Cape town VERY MUCH.
In my opinion, the best PLACE IN Cape Town is the beach, because I love the sea. I can see MANY KINDS OF animaLS, too. Other interesting THING ABOUT this schooL are THE houses for STUDENTS AND THE HOST FAMILY.
IT is a dream TO study at Cape Town, because the school is perfect and IT IS a good opportunity TO speak English fluently and THIS WAY my family WOULD be proud.
I've never visited a beautiful city as Cape Town. The paradise of this city are incredible and looks very interesting. In the video I saw many things to do there. It must be very good to stay there at my vocations. I can learn about the culture and the costums of South Africa. I might be able to do many friends at this city. If I go there, I'd like to meet the English School of Cape Town, to stay with a host family, at the EF's residence to talk with the students and to visit jungle and savanas. I must have good experiencies. I might be able to a diving trip at the ocean to see the dolphins and I can participate of a SAFARI, where I might be able to take many fotographs and make videos of the animals like giraffes,lions, and leopards if it's permited. If I study in the English School of Cape Town, with the videos and the photos, I may show the English School, friends , shoppings, beaches and animals.I must have a spectacular advanture.
Hello, Jessica, I like your comments. Keep on participating. Nice composition. You´ve used the language studied very well.
I've never visited a beautiful city as Cape Town. The paradise of this city IS incredible and looks very interesting. In the video I saw many things to do there. It must be very good to stay there at my vAcations. I can learn about the culture and the costums of South Africa. I might be able to MAKE many friends at this city. If I go there, I'd like to KNOW the English School of Cape Town, to stay with a host family, OR at the EF's residence to talk with the students and to visit jungle and savanas. I must have good experiencies. I might be able to GO diving at the ocean to see the dolphins and I can participate IN a SAFARI, where I might be able to take many fotographs and make videos of the animals like giraffes,lions, and leopards if it's permitTed. If I study in the English School of Cape Town, with the videos and the photos, I may show the English School, friends , shoppings, beaches and animals.I must have a spectacular advEnture.
I like very much the EF Cape Town, because it’s good combination of a great English school in an exotic location. This is a modern school with teachers experienced. The school is in the most popular street in the city. The city is beautiful and do you meet along endless beaches and it’s also when the rich cultures of Africa meet with European influences. The students have the possibility be staying with a host family or in one of EF's residences. Cape Town is a fantastic city with many places to meet and have fun. The perfect place to study English.
I like the EF Cape Town VERY MUCH, because it’s A good combination of a great English school AND an exotic location. This is a modern school with experienced TEACHERS. The school is in the most popular street in the city. The city is beautiful and you KNOW endless beaches and it’s also when the rich cultures of Africa meet with European influences. The students have the possibility TO stay with a host family or in one of EF's residences. Cape Town is a fantastic city with many places to meet and have fun. The perfect place to study English.
The schools of Cape Town is very different of schools in Brazil, because the students can know differents people of other cuulture and nationality , and other things that they can see new places, nature, and study with the best teachers of Cape Town. If I could stay there I may want to stay at a family´s house , and other places, florest, animals, beachers and other peoples. The Cape Town is a bautiful city, and a good place to live.It has a beutiful beachs, places and a interesting activites.The people of Cape Town are very happy and education.Cape Town has a big diversity of animals, plants, has onde beauty different the other places. It is a good local for live and study and this schoos the Cape Town are very intersting because in the same time people study , they has intertrainment.
Hello Jennifer. Very well. Pay attention to the correction.
The schools of Cape Town is very different from schools in Brazil, because the students can meet different people of other culture and nationality. They ALSO can see new places, nature, and study with the best teachers of Cape Town. If I could STUDY there I may want to stay at a family´s house , and VISIT places, forestS,BEACHES AND SEE animalS. The Cape Town is a bautiful city, and a good place to live.It has beutiful beachEs, places and interesting activites.The people of Cape Town are very happy and POLITE.Cape Town has a big diversity of animals, plants, AND THE beauty IS different FROM other places. It is a good PLACE TO live and study and this schooL IS very intersting because WHILE people study , they haVE FUN AS WELL.
Jéssica Gabriela said... The Cape Town is a wonderful place and very interesting to study English,know others peoples and share many cultures.Must be very good know this exotic location.The EF School is a modern and that have preparation to give the better to its students.In Cape Town they must learn about polite and impolite rules,customary,taboo ,history and other things about the culture.But I think that the better is the activities,know the beachs, the safari and dolphins in the ocean.Other interesting experience might be stay with a host family.I loved this place,I will be able to visit the wonderful location some day.
Hi, Jéssica Gabriela, good composition. Here are the corrections: Cape Town is a wonderful place and very interesting to study English,TO MEET other people and share many cultures. IT Must be very good TO know this exotic location.The EF School is modern and IT HAS preparation to give the BEST to its students. WHEN in Cape Town PEOPLE must learn about polite and impolite rules,customS,taboo ,history and other things about the culture.But I think that the beST ARE the activities,TO know the beachEs, TO GO ON A safari and SEE dolphins in the ocean.Other interesting experience might be TO stay with a host family.I loved this place,I will be able to visit thIS wonderful location some day.
One day I would like study inglesh school in Cape Town, because the place is similar with ours. In South Africa they one folk hospitaleiry and also they are much happy and over there, he has excellent climate, and his beach quit as beautiful as the Brazil. At English school in Cape Town is one the better world. They have one adquete freme for who would like know new places. They video have been demonstrate that South Africa Doesn't poor, but the coutry is very rich in culture a Cape Town is fatastic place to study english. If I pass some days with some femilys, I will love much because I learn about aspect social, history and politic of South Africa. I learn very much with people's Africa,if I live there.
Hi, Gabriel. Try to read what you write. Here is the correction:
One day I would like to study AT THIS English school in Cape Town, because the place is similar TO ours. In South Africa the PEOPLE ARE hospitaBLE and also VERY happy. THE WEATHER over there IS excellent and THE beachES ARE as beautiful as HERE IN Brazil. THIS English school in Cape Town is one OF the bEST IN THE world. The video HAS SHOWN that South Africa ISN´T poor, IT is very rich in culture aND A faNtastic place to study English. If I SPEND some days with A FAMILY (femilys)THERE, I will love IT VERY much because I WILL learn about social RULES, history and politicS of South Africa. I´LL learn very much with (people's Africa) AFRICAN PEOPLE, if I live there.
JULIO CÉSAR, here is your composition. It´s very small. It´s not just a comment. Try better next time:
I really like the English School in Cape Town (Becauseis)BECAUSE IT IS a difFerent culture. (and) If I study in Cape Town I may learn VERY much.In Cape Town (have)THERE ARE (a) lotS of things to do and (any) MANY schools to choose.
Rosana, I asked you to write a good paragraph about the video. You haven´t written enough.
Rosana said... I liked this school in South Africa because (it is a)THIS coUntry similar to Brasil.This school is a good way to learn and become familiar with other languages in a fun way. Rosana D. I5V5I315
Hi Débora, here is your composition and the correction. Very well
Débora said... Oh! Teacher I loved to see the video!! I think I won't have problems with the people, the culture, the diferent and beautiful adventures that (has)THERE ARE in South Africa, but I think I wouldn't like a lot the weather, cause I think it's very hot and it doesn't agree with me, but The E.F Cape town (it's) IS an important, interesting and very funny oportunity, cause (there) you must practice your English with other people, and IT must be very nice TO learn with local people that HAVE SPOKEN English since they WERE born, by the way I agree with THE host (familiy) FAMILY, that the video showed, because I think it's A new way to (discover) MEET new people and practice your language and if I were there, (certainly) I'll CERTAINLY stay with a host family, cause THEY will be my second parents (whose)WHO I (ever) will ALWAYS remeMber in my heart!
I (thougth) THINK the (beatches) BEACHES,( all the climbs), the sun shine in the clouds, the trees, the animals, principalLy the dolphins and whales, (everything) must be perfect! And I'll play and take ADVANTAGE OF (a lot of) all the wonderfulNESS that has in South Africa! But I think I won't (be in) GO ON A safari, I know it's very beautiful , but I can't trust (in) the wild animals, they're very kindly but only when they are there and I'm here very FAR away!! I (stayed) GOT very interested (about) IN (the) Nelson Mandela's (histories) HISTORY, I studied it (on the) AT school, but learn it in the local scenario, must be very nice!
I think (of) THAT (where you go) you MUST be a (litlle) LITTLE polite WHERE YOU GO, know the basic of good manners, and also know the taboos (to never do), then it's very important TO know about cultural literacy abroad.
Other thing that I like (it's) ARE the clothes that they usually (use) WEAR, always with diFferent and (alive) LIVE colors, it's very beautiful and happy!
However I think Brazil (it's) IS not similar (with) TO Cape Town, South Africa because our country (it's) IS not too hot and Cape Town is very hot!! But it's not only the weather (it's) the animals, the vegetation, there (has) ARE (a lot of) MUCH MORE rich places THERE than here, and the cultures, the dances, their behavior!!For all these reasons, Brazil (it's) is not like Cape Town, or South Afica. Our country has beauty, but for me we can't compare, cause it's not the same!
Well, teacher I liked a lot to learn more about South Africa,I'm also glad to write here and I hope I have not (much wrong!) MADE MANY MISTAKES.
I really like this school,it's really interesting. In the school you can see (spetacular)SPECTACULAR views like Lions head moutain. In THIS school (have) THERE ARE so many (tipes) RESOURCES of study like computers. Outside the class you can meet new people of (diferent) DIFFERENT locations. Inside of the class you learn (english)ENGLISH and South Africa's culture (to learn a fluent english) like history and politcs. In this school (i) really like the (acomodations) ACCOMODATIONS,it's so confortable and you can make new friends too. In THE activities outside (of) the school,you can visit the city, CAN GO ON A (the) safari to see the big five. I like the beach too,it's only 10 minutes (of) FROM the school. IF (if) my school was near (of) a beach. If (i)I DIDN´T (don't) study in CILC and (have) HAD money, (i) I WOULDN´T (don't) waste time to GO AND study (english) ENGLISH in Cape Town.
Paulo, here´s your composition with the corrections. In parentheses are the things you need to correct. Nice participation.
Hello, Ismael. Now your composition is really here. Check the corrections, ok? In parentheses are what you should get attention. It´s a good composition. Way to go!
ISMAEL SILVA I5V5I315 SAID :
This (english) ENGLISH school is a good place to learn and meet people. Here the student can do many (thinks) THINGS that can be used to (expend) EXPAND (your) THEIR vocabulary. The people that come here to study have many options of (activits) ACTIVITIES, for (a exemple) EXAMPLE: walk on the (beatiful) BEAUTIFUL beaches, see very (intiresting) INTERESTING animals in the ocean and savanas, (make) TAKE a tour (on) OF the city and DO (others) OTHER cool things. Before STARTING (start) (to study) STUDYING, the students have two places that they can choose to stay: the host famylies where they will live with a family (of) FROM this COUNTRY (contry) and the EF's (resideces) RESIDENCES where the students can live with students (of) FROM many (diferents) DIFFERENT places (of) IN the world. The classes are (especials)ESPECIALLY for a (litle) LITTLE group of students because the teachers can help more classES. Here the school (ofer) OFFERS a multimedia language lab and (acess) ACCESS TO (of) THE Internet (internet) for the students TO use AND (to) learn more. This is a good school TO (for) learn (about) ENGLISH (english). If (if) somebody (want) WANTS to make a transformation in his life, this is the perfect place.
HI STUDENTS! LET´S MEET HERE AND DO A WRITING ACTIVITY. I´D LIKE YOU TO WATCH THIS VIDEO ABOUT THIS ENGLISH SCHOOL IN CAPE TOWN AND WRITE ABOUT WHAT MOST IMPRESSED YOU IN THE VIDEO. WAS IT THE SCHOOL ITSELF? THE BEACHES? THE SAFARI? THE POSSIBILITY TO MAKE FRIENDS FROM DIFFERENT CULTURES? DO YOU THINK THIS PLACE IS SIMILAR TO BRAZIL IN SOME ASPECTS? IF YOU STAYED WITH A FAMILY THERE, HOW WOULD YOU BEHAVE YOURSELF? IS IT IMPORTANT TO KNOW THE RULES OF ETIQUETTE? HAD YOU THOUGHT ABOUT CULTURAL LITERACY BEFORE?
ReplyDeleteI had heard about the politics of South Africa before because the Apatheid was a shame that had become news everywhere at that time, but the beauty of Cape Town I hadn´t seen before. What most impressed me in the video was the similarity between Brazil and Africa. It must be very good to lie on the beach there. The sun there must be as hot as here. If I stayed with a host family I might learn a lot about the culture. I may........./ I might be able to......../ I can..........etc etc.
I like the English Schoo en Cape Town.It's so interesting and it's a very good experience.In this school teachers teach English with true experiences and true life.The view is so beautiful and relaxing.The adventures in South Africa are radicals, funny and interesting.It's a good place for a English school.The students might be very happy when they stay in a host family and they learn much with their experiences.
ReplyDeleteWilliam P. I5V5I3
This is it! William. The first one, although I think you should´ve written more. Ok ? I´m going to make some corrections:
ReplyDeleteI like the English School in Cape Town.It's so interesting and it's a very good experience.In this school teachers teach English with true experiences and true life.The view is so beautiful and relaxing.The adventures in South Africa are radical, funny and interesting.It's a good place for an English school.The students might be very happy when they stay with a host family and they learn a lot with their experiences.
William P. I5V5I3
Camila Viviane said...
ReplyDeleteI really liked the city because the cable is a very interesting and attractive. His English schools offer a high quality education, and moreover offer activities that encourage students to study. I am willing to travel to it to improve my English and to know the culture of Africans.
Foreign students who do exchange in Cape Town, are well received and have the choice between staying in a host family or in one of EF's residences. And students who stay in host families are very close to the local culture and learn how the daily lives of residents, as students who prefer the republics know students from different places and learn a little of different cultures.
Cape Town is a magical place, and also offers several tourist attractions, both for students and for tourists. The beaches are beautiful, walking in the savanna are extraordinary and the city still offers attractions such as nightclubs, shopping malls and other places for fun. And are all those things that make Cape Town a place unlike any other, and so it attracts people from all over the world who are studying in order to have fun and learn new cultures.
September 10, 2009 4:20 PM
Hello, Camila Viviane. That´s it!Very good. You´ve explored lots of different aspects of the video. Good work. Here are some corrections:
ReplyDeleteI really liked the city because the cape is a very interesting and attractive place. This English school offers a high quality education, and moreover, it offers activities that encourage students to study. I am willing to travel to it to improve my English and to know the culture of Africans.
Foreign students who do exchange in Cape Town, are well received and have the choice between staying in a host family or in one of EF's residences. And students who stay in host families are very close to the local culture and learn about the residents´daily lives, as for the students who prefer the students´ residence meet students from different places and learn a little of different cultures.
Cape Town is a magical place, and also offers several tourist attractions, both for students and for tourists. The beaches are beautiful, walking in the savanna are extraordinary and the city still offers attractions such as nightclubs, shopping malls and other places for fun. And are all those things that make Cape Town a place unlike any other, and so it attracts people from all over the world who are studying in order to have fun and learn new cultures.
Luiz Henrique.
ReplyDeleteI like learning about other cultures. People in this school should learn other customs. The place is wonderful, they can have fun too.What most impressed me in the video was the animals and the place very beautiful. And the activities in the beaches are very radical. The students might be very happy when they learn other contumes. So the English School in Cape Town must be very important for students who like to study English.
Hello Luiz, very well, let´s correct the paragraph.
ReplyDeleteI like learning about other cultures. People in this school should learn other customs. The place is wonderful, they can have fun too.What most impressed me in the video was the animals and the place, IT´S very beautiful. And the activities in the beaches are very radical. The students might be very happy when they learn other contumes. So the English School in Cape Town must be very important for students who like to study English.
September 11, 2009 9:52 AM
Victor Douglas said...
ReplyDeleteThis school is amazing. The local it’s very same with Brazil, I'm talking about the weather, of course, its very hot.
If I study in Cape Town, I don't have problem with the weather. And then there's the beaches, safari and the people, they are fantastic. But I got to know their culture first, right? Like how greeting the people on the streets? And the local Taboos?
Might I stay with a local family, because maybe I learned more of the culture of there, and I have much of curiosity about the Apartheid. For this, that school its fantastic, because the local, adventures and the local (again)is fantastic. One day maybe, I go to cape Town, study on EF Cape Twon.
Victor, I5V5I3
September 11, 2009 9:08 AM
Victor, here is the correction. Ok?
ReplyDeleteThis school is amazing. The local IS very SIMILAR TO Brazil, I'm talking about the weather, of course, it´S very hot.
If I study in Cape Town, I WON´T have problemS with the weather. And then there ARE the beaches, safari and the people, they are fantastic. But I got to know their culture first, right? SUCH AS how greeting the people on the streets, and the local Taboos.
IF I stay with a local family, I MAY learn more ABOUT the culture, there, and I have A LOT of curiosity about the Apartheid. For this, that school Is fantastic, because the PLACE, THE adventures ARE GREAT. MAYBE, One day I´LL go to cape Town AND study on EF Cape Twon.
Oh,I think this is incredible,because the students can see wonderful places,learn a lot of new things that maybe they didn't learn,practice sports and they can meet some people of different places of the world, so this is very nice.
ReplyDeleteI think the form they know the culture of Africa and others cultures is so interesting and fun. There are some schools in Brazil where the classes are boring.
Humm...In the video I could see similiar things of Brazil ,as the beaches,as the smiles on the faces of people and other things.But ,If I stayed at any home would be very good ,but I feel strange because maybe I wouldn't know how I have to behave in theirhouse.
Shaynna, very well, here are some corrections:
ReplyDeleteOh,I think THE SCHOOL IN CAPE TOWN is incredible because the students can see wonderful places,learn a lot of new things that maybe they didn't learn,practice sports and they can meet some people of different places IN the world, so this is very nice.
I think the form they know the culture of Africa and other cultures ARE so interesting and fun. There are some schools in Brazil where the classes are boring.
Humm...In the video I could see similiar things TO Brazil ,as the beaches,the smiles on the people´S FACES and other things.If I stayed at any home would be very good ,but I feel strange because maybe I wouldn't know how TO behave in their house.
Cape town is a wonderful place,and very interesting,too.There are a lot of things to do in there.You can study and the same time to have fun.
ReplyDeleteI had heard about Cape town school is a great school.If you really want to improve your english you must go to Cape town school.
You can staying with host family or one in of EF's residences.If you stayng with host family you can learn things about the culture of Africa..It's very interesting.
There are many places to visite and to have fun.Such as go to the beach,relax,practice sports.
Anyway,Cape town is an amazing city.
Monica - I5V5I315
September 15, 2009 4:28 PM
Hello, Monica, good composition. Here is the correction.
ReplyDeleteCape town is a wonderful place,and very interesting,too.There are lots of things to do there.You can study and AT the same time have fun.
I had heard about Cape town school AND THIS great school.If you really want to improve your English you must go to Cape town.
You can stay with A host family or in ONE OF THE EF's residences.If you stay with A host family you can learn things about the culture of Africa..It's very interesting.
There are many places to visit and to have fun.Such as goING to the beachES, relax, Practice sports.
Anyway,Cape town is an amazing city.
Cape Town is magnificent it’s impressive .This is a beautiful and It remembers Brazil.
ReplyDeleteIn Cape Town, I want one day may go to study because It offers many activities for stimulate the student to study. In EF School the Cape Town the student may improve your English apart from the general English it can also study the culture for culture the South Africa for example: customs, arts, music and others. The culture of the South Africa is very rich and interesting.
And the most interesting is that student can host in the school or an A host family, I think is host family is better because they can you help in the study to student don’t has many expensive at your host.
In Cape Town to interesting the tourist points there are beautiful beaches to practice surf, play volleyball and others sports.
The EF school in Cape Town is one good place for study English.
September 15, 2009 4:18 PM
Cape Town is magnificent AND impressive .This is a beautiful PLACE and It REMINDS ME OF Brazil.
ReplyDeleteI MAY GO TO STUDY IN CAPE TOWN one day because It offers many activities for stimulatING the student to study. In EF School IN Cape Town the student may improve THEIR English. Apart from the general English STUDENTS can also study the culture OF South Africa for example: customs, arts, music and others. The culture of the South Africa is very rich and interesting.
And the most interesting is that student can STAY in the school RESIDENCE or WITH A host family, I think IT BETTER TO STAY WITH A host family because they can help YOU in YOUR studIES AND IT´S NOT VERY EXPENSIVE.
In Cape Town, the touriSTIC points are AMAZING. THERE ARE beautiful beaches to practice surf, play volleyball and other sports.
The EF school in Cape Town is A good place TO study English.
K@u@ninha said...
ReplyDeleteThe cape town school is perfect, because the school has everything I need. In Cape Town you study and has funny at the same time. At this school I can study English and learn about others cultures. I liked very much this school, and I want so much study in Cape town.
In my opinion, the best local of Cape Town is the beach, because I love the sea. I can see the much animal’s kind too. Other interesting of this school, there are houses for families.
To done, is a dream study at Cape Town, because the school is perfect and a good opportunity for speak English fluently and my family gonna be proud.
September 15, 2009 4:17 PM
Kauane, very good. Nice composition. Here is the correction.
ReplyDeleteThe cape town school is perfect, because the school has everything I need. In Cape Town you study and HAVE FUN at the same time. At this school I can study English and learn about other cultures. I liked this school VERY MUCH, and I want TO study in Cape town VERY MUCH.
In my opinion, the best PLACE IN Cape Town is the beach, because I love the sea. I can see MANY KINDS OF animaLS, too. Other interesting THING ABOUT this schooL are THE houses for STUDENTS AND THE HOST FAMILY.
IT is a dream TO study at Cape Town, because the school is perfect and IT IS a good opportunity TO speak English fluently and THIS WAY my family WOULD be proud.
September 15, 2009 4:17 PM
I've never visited a beautiful city as Cape Town. The paradise of this city are incredible and looks very interesting. In the video I saw many things to do there. It must be very good to stay there at my vocations. I can learn about the culture and the costums of South Africa. I might be able to do many friends at this city. If I go there, I'd like to meet the English School of Cape Town, to stay with a host family, at the EF's residence to talk with the students and to visit jungle and savanas. I must have good experiencies. I might be able to a diving trip at the ocean to see the dolphins and I can participate of a SAFARI, where I might be able to take many fotographs and make videos of the animals like giraffes,lions, and leopards if it's permited. If I study in the English School of Cape Town, with the videos and the photos, I may show the English School, friends , shoppings, beaches and animals.I must have a spectacular advanture.
ReplyDeleteJéssica Nogueira Silva
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Hello, Jessica, I like your comments. Keep on participating. Nice composition. You´ve used the language studied very well.
ReplyDeleteI've never visited a beautiful city as Cape Town. The paradise of this city IS incredible and looks very interesting. In the video I saw many things to do there. It must be very good to stay there at my vAcations. I can learn about the culture and the costums of South Africa. I might be able to MAKE many friends at this city. If I go there, I'd like to KNOW the English School of Cape Town, to stay with a host family, OR at the EF's residence to talk with the students and to visit jungle and savanas. I must have good experiencies. I might be able to GO diving at the ocean to see the dolphins and I can participate IN a SAFARI, where I might be able to take many fotographs and make videos of the animals like giraffes,lions, and leopards if it's permitTed. If I study in the English School of Cape Town, with the videos and the photos, I may show the English School, friends , shoppings, beaches and animals.I must have a spectacular advEnture.
I like very much the EF Cape Town, because it’s good combination of a great English school in an exotic location.
ReplyDeleteThis is a modern school with teachers experienced. The school is in the most popular street in the city. The city is beautiful and do you meet along endless beaches and it’s also when the rich cultures of Africa meet with European influences.
The students have the possibility be staying with a host family or in one of EF's residences.
Cape Town is a fantastic city with many places to meet and have fun. The perfect place to study English.
Ana Cláudia I5V5I3
September 15, 2009 3:09 PM
Ok Ana, here is the correction
ReplyDeleteI like the EF Cape Town VERY MUCH, because it’s A good combination of a great English school AND an exotic location.
This is a modern school with experienced TEACHERS. The school is in the most popular street in the city. The city is beautiful and you KNOW endless beaches and it’s also when the rich cultures of Africa meet with European influences.
The students have the possibility TO stay with a host family or in one of EF's residences.
Cape Town is a fantastic city with many places to meet and have fun. The perfect place to study English.
The schools of Cape Town is very different of schools in Brazil, because the students can know differents people of other cuulture and nationality , and other things that they can see new places, nature, and study with the best teachers of Cape Town.
ReplyDeleteIf I could stay there I may want to stay at a family´s house , and other places, florest, animals, beachers and other peoples.
The Cape Town is a bautiful city, and a good place to live.It has a beutiful beachs, places and a interesting activites.The people of Cape Town are very happy and education.Cape Town has a big diversity of animals, plants, has onde beauty different the other places. It is a good local for live and study and this schoos the Cape Town are very intersting because in the same time people study , they has intertrainment.
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Hello Jennifer. Very well. Pay attention to the correction.
ReplyDeleteThe schools of Cape Town is very different from schools in Brazil, because the students can meet different people of other culture and nationality. They ALSO can see new places, nature, and study with the best teachers of Cape Town.
If I could STUDY there I may want to stay at a family´s house , and VISIT places, forestS,BEACHES AND SEE animalS.
The Cape Town is a bautiful city, and a good place to live.It has beutiful beachEs, places and interesting activites.The people of Cape Town are very happy and POLITE.Cape Town has a big diversity of animals, plants, AND THE beauty IS different FROM other places. It is a good PLACE TO live and study and this schooL IS very intersting because WHILE people study , they haVE FUN AS WELL.
Jéssica Gabriela said...
ReplyDeleteThe Cape Town is a wonderful place and very interesting to study English,know others peoples and share many cultures.Must be very good know this exotic location.The EF School is a modern and that have preparation to give the better to its students.In Cape Town they must learn about polite and impolite rules,customary,taboo ,history and other things about the culture.But I think that the better is the activities,know the beachs, the safari and dolphins in the ocean.Other interesting experience might be stay with a host family.I loved this place,I will be able to visit the wonderful location some day.
September 18, 2009 9:31 AM
Hi, Jéssica Gabriela, good composition. Here are the corrections:
ReplyDeleteCape Town is a wonderful place and very interesting to study English,TO MEET other people and share many cultures. IT Must be very good TO know this exotic location.The EF School is modern and IT HAS preparation to give the BEST to its students. WHEN in Cape Town PEOPLE must learn about polite and impolite rules,customS,taboo ,history and other things about the culture.But I think that the beST ARE the activities,TO know the beachEs, TO GO ON A safari and SEE dolphins in the ocean.Other interesting experience might be TO stay with a host family.I loved this place,I will be able to visit thIS wonderful location some day.
Gabriel Alves i5v5i3
ReplyDeleteOne day I would like study inglesh school in Cape Town, because the place is similar with ours. In South Africa they one folk hospitaleiry and also they are much happy and over there, he has excellent climate, and his beach quit as beautiful as the Brazil.
At English school in Cape Town is one the better world. They have one adquete freme for who would like know new places. They video have been demonstrate that South Africa Doesn't poor, but the coutry is very rich in culture a Cape Town is fatastic place to study english.
If I pass some days with some femilys, I will love much because I learn about aspect social, history and politic of South Africa. I learn very much with people's Africa,if I live there.
September 15, 2009 2:48 PM
Hi, Gabriel. Try to read what you write. Here is the correction:
ReplyDeleteOne day I would like to study AT THIS English school in Cape Town, because the place is similar TO ours. In South Africa the PEOPLE ARE hospitaBLE and also VERY happy. THE WEATHER over there IS excellent and THE beachES ARE as beautiful as HERE IN Brazil.
THIS English school in Cape Town is one OF the bEST IN THE world. The video HAS SHOWN that South Africa ISN´T poor, IT is very rich in culture aND A faNtastic place to study English.
If I SPEND some days with A FAMILY (femilys)THERE, I will love IT VERY much because I WILL learn about social RULES, history and politicS of South Africa. I´LL learn very much with (people's Africa) AFRICAN PEOPLE, if I live there.
September 21, 2009 7:36 AM
JULIO CÉSAR, here is your composition. It´s very small. It´s not just a comment. Try better next time:
ReplyDeleteI really like the English School in Cape Town (Becauseis)BECAUSE IT IS a difFerent culture. (and) If I study in Cape Town I may learn VERY much.In Cape Town (have)THERE ARE (a) lotS of things to do and (any) MANY schools to choose.
Júlio Cesar I5V5I315
Rosana, I asked you to write a good paragraph about the video. You haven´t written enough.
ReplyDeleteRosana said...
I liked this school in South Africa because (it is a)THIS coUntry similar to Brasil.This school is a good way to learn and become familiar with other languages in a fun way.
Rosana D. I5V5I315
ismael silva i5v5i315 said...
ReplyDeleteteacher, where IS my composition?
September 20, 2009 1:23 PM
ISMAEL, I don´t know. Post it again because I didn´t see it.
Hi Débora, here is your composition and the correction. Very well
ReplyDeleteDébora said...
Oh! Teacher I loved to see the video!! I think I won't have problems with the people, the culture, the diferent and beautiful adventures that (has)THERE ARE in South Africa, but I think I wouldn't like a lot the weather, cause I think it's very hot and it doesn't agree with me, but The E.F Cape town (it's) IS an important, interesting and very funny oportunity, cause (there) you must practice your English with other people, and IT must be very nice TO learn with local people that HAVE SPOKEN English since they WERE born, by the way I agree with THE host (familiy) FAMILY, that the video showed, because I think it's A new way to (discover) MEET new people and practice your language and if I were there, (certainly) I'll CERTAINLY stay with a host family, cause THEY will be my second parents (whose)WHO I (ever) will ALWAYS remeMber in my heart!
I (thougth) THINK the (beatches) BEACHES,( all the climbs), the sun shine in the clouds, the trees, the animals, principalLy the dolphins and whales, (everything) must be perfect! And I'll play and take ADVANTAGE OF (a lot of) all the wonderfulNESS that has in South Africa! But I think I won't (be in) GO ON A safari, I know it's very beautiful , but I can't trust (in) the wild animals, they're very kindly but only when they are there and I'm here very FAR away!! I (stayed) GOT very interested (about) IN (the) Nelson Mandela's (histories) HISTORY, I studied it (on the) AT school, but learn it in the local scenario, must be very nice!
I think (of) THAT (where you go) you MUST be a (litlle) LITTLE polite WHERE YOU GO, know the basic of good manners, and also know the taboos (to never do), then it's very important TO know about cultural literacy abroad.
Other thing that I like (it's) ARE the clothes that they usually (use) WEAR, always with diFferent and (alive) LIVE colors, it's very beautiful and happy!
However I think Brazil (it's) IS not similar (with) TO Cape Town, South Africa because our country (it's) IS not too hot and Cape Town is very hot!! But it's not only the weather (it's) the animals, the vegetation, there (has) ARE (a lot of) MUCH MORE rich places THERE than here, and the cultures, the dances, their behavior!!For all these reasons, Brazil (it's) is not like Cape Town, or South Afica. Our country has beauty, but for me we can't compare, cause it's not the same!
Well, teacher I liked a lot to learn more about South Africa,I'm also glad to write here and I hope I have not (much wrong!) MADE MANY MISTAKES.
Grateful,
Débora - I5V5I315!
September 15, 2009 10:35 AM
PAULO HENRIQUE CARVALHO SOUZA
ReplyDeleteI really like this school,it's really interesting. In the school you can see (spetacular)SPECTACULAR views like Lions head moutain.
In THIS school (have) THERE ARE so many (tipes) RESOURCES of study like computers. Outside the class you can meet new people of (diferent) DIFFERENT locations.
Inside of the class you learn (english)ENGLISH and South Africa's culture (to learn a fluent english) like history and politcs.
In this school (i) really like the (acomodations) ACCOMODATIONS,it's so confortable and you can make new friends too.
In THE activities outside (of) the school,you can visit the city, CAN GO ON A (the) safari to see the big five. I like the beach too,it's only 10 minutes (of) FROM the school. IF (if) my school was near (of) a beach.
If (i)I DIDN´T (don't) study in CILC and (have) HAD money, (i) I WOULDN´T (don't) waste time to GO AND study (english) ENGLISH in Cape Town.
Paulo, here´s your composition with the corrections. In parentheses are the things you need to correct. Nice participation.
September 24, 2009 1:32 PM
Hello, Ismael. Now your composition is really here. Check the corrections, ok? In parentheses are what you should get attention. It´s a good composition. Way to go!
ReplyDeleteISMAEL SILVA I5V5I315 SAID :
This (english) ENGLISH school is a good place to learn and meet people. Here the student can do many (thinks) THINGS that can be used to (expend) EXPAND (your) THEIR vocabulary.
The people that come here to study have many options of (activits) ACTIVITIES, for (a exemple) EXAMPLE: walk on the (beatiful) BEAUTIFUL beaches, see very (intiresting) INTERESTING animals in the ocean and savanas, (make) TAKE a tour (on) OF the city and DO (others) OTHER cool things. Before STARTING (start) (to study) STUDYING, the students have two places that they can choose to stay: the host famylies where they will live with a family (of) FROM this COUNTRY (contry) and the EF's (resideces) RESIDENCES where the students can live with students (of) FROM many (diferents) DIFFERENT places (of) IN the world.
The classes are (especials)ESPECIALLY for a (litle) LITTLE group of students because the teachers can help more classES. Here the school (ofer) OFFERS a multimedia language lab and (acess) ACCESS TO (of) THE Internet (internet) for the students TO use AND (to) learn more.
This is a good school TO (for) learn (about) ENGLISH (english). If (if) somebody (want) WANTS to make a transformation in his life, this is the perfect place.
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